MY SPECIAL PLACE
main ideas:
1. Breezy wind
2. People
3. Memories
4. delicious food
memoris
When I was five I loved going to splash planet.my brother would look as silly as a goose waddling all around splash planet. I would always tease my dad go in the pool and he did. I would love splashing water on my brother my fav part would be when I could watch my dad and brother go down the giant slide. after that me and my brother would go to the cold pool and play crocodile it is a game where me and my brother would be crocodiles and we would swim backwards it would be freezing “bbbbrrrr” it was a bit cold but we liked it anyway.
people
I could see the happiness of the joyful people.The the people looked as happy as a joyful butterfly. when I get to see the bright sun on top of me I feel like I am in heaven. I always would have a big smile to show everyone that I feel happy. When I see the people having fun I join in the fun and then it turns out to be the BEST DAY EVER!
Breezy wind
When I feel the wind on my face I feel as fresh as a daisy on the soft grass .When I don’t want to jump I do a mini jump but my brother thought it was silly so I just slided in like I do at school (sometimes) anyways I still love the wind on face even when I am in the pool. THE breezy wind on my face makes me feel like I need to get a chair get a drink and relax I like the splash planet breeze.
Delicious food
After a good time at splash planet we head back home and we had mcdonalds for dinner.with four cups of pepsi and some chicken nuggets for a little snack with dinner And some delicious cat food for lilly. she looked as cute as a cupcake .obviously we had extra extra yummy food for us .how knows what will happen next time in the wonderful splash planet adventure.
Written by: Naisa
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Star: You added a lot of bling e.g Color,Font,Underlining Words.
ReplyDeleteWish: Add more describing words, and next time use a spell write, and after every full stop add a capital letter. Riana :)
I like that you put detail in your witting
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